This was my first time visiting Three Word Wednesday. I had a lot of fun with this. For this week the words were:
Fracture
Noise
Vanish
I can’t write to you…
You understand, don’t you?
The silence is deafening, the tension so high. I’m drinking tea, looking at each passing face from this salmon colored chair. Yet all I see are images with no story. Blurred faces vanishing into the next scene.
I would welcome the noise if I could hear it. You told me how you needed me to say something. You texted me your longing, yet all I can do is sit here, fractured, drumming my chipped nails against this perfect porcelain plate.
Perhaps you will leave now. Annoyed. Frustrated.
And I will remain, sipping this tea, inhaling its fragrance.
Welcoming a caress that you could never offer.
The Little Writer That Could 
sad and poignant poem.
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Thanks Mary… I tend to swim in the deep waters so you might see more of this type of work…
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What a great idea and read. Bravo is right!
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What a great 3WW debut! Bravo!
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Very vivid and creative writing, I really enjoyed it. Chocolate has filled a similar role for me, from time to time 🙂
A fracture in the time loop of our now
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Excellent narration! Deep, insightful… a certain wistfulness..chaotic impressions that cloud the clairvoyant sight… and an absolutely delicious ending!!
“A caress that you could never offer.”… this line is so profound.. I think it could be viewed from a variety of different perspectives..
Indeed, often a caress is found wonting.. which otherwise induces prodigious torrents of creativity…
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I really enjoyed this one, April. Makes me want to try some writing experiments that I’ve thought about. (Why is it easier to harness the negative emotions?) Good job! 🙂
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Thanks Bill… you should definitely experiment and stretch those creative muscles!
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Very good and now I MUST have a doughnut. 😉
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Me too… what would the world be without chocolate? 🙂
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I really liked this, your choice of words, pacing…
Welcome to 3WW!
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Thanks Mark!
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ooh, nice, atmospheric and great tone
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I never even considered atmosphere… big thanks you for letting me know the old subconscious was doing its job, lol!
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You weaved it well.
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Thanks Jaymie!
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Wow! Just amazing, so descriptive and vivid. The last lines are sublime.
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I came so close to not putting in that ending.. or changing it. Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it.
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Can I share the donut?
blowing over that mug of coffee
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Of course, dear! There’s more than enough to go around! 🙂
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Welcome to 3WW. A nice atmospheric piece to begin with. Well done.
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Kind thanks, sir!
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Maybe your first, but I certainly hope it isn’t the last. It was a delight to read.
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I’ll be back next week, I’m sure. Never know if the muse will kick in, but I hope so! Thanks for your comments!
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Delicious and nice reading
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Thank you Jeeves!
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Great! what a fun way to be introduced to your blog.
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Appreciate your kind remarks, Jennifer!
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Why must you be so talented AND funny?
WHY???
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Oh, my sweet friend, bschooled… it’s because I am dashing and wonderful and all things sublime.
(but know deep in my heart I could never rock as hard as you!!)
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That was a fun read! nice post…
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Kind thanks for visiting!
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Strong and fun – enjoyed this!
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Appreciate that!
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Delicious.
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Thanks for stopping by!
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Welcome to 3WW, we all appreciate you contributing. And what a contribution. Great use of the words, but there’s passion and emotion in your writing. Well done.
Soul Trade
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Thanks very much!
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That last line punched me right in the gut– and left me wanting a donut. Now that’s good writing.
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A woman in her thirties MUST eat donuts once in a while! Too bad my thirties are just over the ridge… the good news is that a woman in her (ahem) young forties can eat all the donuts she wants, lol!
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Nice poetry, love velvety bite!
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Chocolate always has the best bites! Thanks for your feedback!
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This had me hanging on the wonderful cascade of thoughts. Nice use of the prompts
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Very sweet of you to say so! Appreciate you stopping by!
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Nice piece…love the word “fractured”.
Peace…Jenn
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Thanks Jenn!
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really cool one!!!
i had to laugh! can almost relate to real life..
i am at boingz boingz…i found out last time i came here that its a hotspot…so girls are jumping and i am surfing…translation…..GENERAL AWSOMENESS.
Shraddha
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General awesomeness is always good!
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Wow the speaker makes so angry! I love how you can elicit so much emotion with such little writing, with such a simple scene.
Fantastic 3WW!
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The muse is frustrated and frustrating…beautifully said. I am adding this blog to my blog list.
b
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Thank you b! One of my favorite blogs is by a person with “b” as their name. Must be a very special letter reserved for the coolest people!
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I like all the descriptive words here, especially the part about drumming nails against a porcelain plate, as well as the honesty, how the reader can really get into the character’s mind and feel the tension and frustration… Nice image to match this piece.
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Thank you for such thoughtful feedback! It means so much to know when I’ve done something right… really appreciate your kind words!
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A delicious ending to some excellent and deeply felt words.
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Thank you Anthony! Thanks for stopping by!
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